Friday 9 August 2013

A wee dragon.

The little dragon wiggles on my fingers.
It started wriggling up my arm, but stopped at my shoulder.


The little dragon smiled.
I smiled back.


It ate an apple, which tingled its throat.
Its wings were a nice shade of black


Drew (Thats what I named it) Got on one of my toy skateboards and rode around the room
I called the skateboard “The Dragon Dragster”


Then drew bounced on my ball.
I thought to myself “Dragon Ball Z”
He climbed up onto my wardrobe and opened it up.
He saw my secret stash of candy and tried to scurry up to it, but he fell down
.
“You Like candy?” I said
Drew nodded.


I opened the jar and threw a piece of candy to him
He Chomped on it and licked it until it was nothing but crumbs.


His particular favourite was a lollipop with a dragon on it
“Dragonception” I chuckled to myself


He curled up in some rags and went to sleep
I Walked out of the room and turned the light off.

What drew looks like:



10 comments:

  1. Wow Teva!
    Thank you for sharing the dragon website with me.
    But your writing is great.
    You're dragon looks so real.
    I like how you have presented it like a poem.
    Well done:)

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  2. Wow Teva!
    Your story is interesting,
    that's a cool picture of the dragon when he grows up.
    Keep up the good work Ben!

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  3. Cool Teva!
    I really like the dragon all grown up.
    I had a cool picture in my head.
    Your are very creative.
    Keep it up.

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  4. Cool Teva,
    Great Story.
    I like how you made your dragon dark green.
    I like the part in your story where you said the little dragon smiled and I smiled back.
    Great work Teva.

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  5. Cool story about your dragon Drew.
    I like how you made a dragon.
    I could really visualize every part.

    p.s here is a website where you can create awesome dragons http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/183651

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  6. Awesome story Teva. Great idea calling the skate board the dragon dragster and your ball dragon ball Z. Super funny.

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  7. Wow Teva
    Great story.
    I like the bit were it says he chomped on it and licked it until it was nothing but crumbs.
    Keep up the good work!!!
    Well done :)

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  8. Great story Teva. I like how you mentioned "Dragon Ball Z", that was funny. I also like your picture at the end. Great work Teva ;-).

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  9. Great story Teva! That was a great story. Where did you find that picture at the end.
    Keep up the work.
    Cameron

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  10. That was a cool story Teva
    Keep it up

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