Showing posts with label WRITING. Show all posts
Showing posts with label WRITING. Show all posts

Thursday, 7 November 2013

The werewolf monkey

The Werewolf-monkey


A Werewolf-monkey is a TERRIFYING creature. This particular creature lurks in the night with the full moon out. If you come across this creature, RUN LIKE THE WIND! Just run. Don’t make too much noise, keep reading to find out why. This mammal is the most dangerous of rare animals because It can transform into a cute monkey. (Nek Minute) The cute little monkey is your worst nightmare! (Scary Music)
We are going right into the lives of: The werewolf monkey.
The werewolf monkey, with David Attenborough.
The werewolf monkey feeds on rotten bananas, unlike its normal monkey brother.
If a werewolf monkey eats a very ripe banana, it has a 50-50 % chance of being returned to normal.


On a full moon, this creature will grow more fur, claws, and will become much MUCH stronger. So BEWARE!
There are only a few left in the world. This is good because this is the most dangerous creature in the world!
The Werewolf-monkey has altered senses. He can smell from 20,00km away. He can hear you snore at night. (If you do snore)
He can see like he’s using binoculars! His fur can feel the change in the wind. He can feel you breath. So basically, he can hunt you down like a fish and a cat swimming together.







                  oh no, that poor fishy!

SO WHEN YOU’RE OUT IN THE JUNGLE, BEWARE!

(Made by zeb and teva)

Wednesday, 17 July 2013

The Earth Quake

WOAH! the classroom jolted straightforward.
I got scared.
We then rushed outside on to the courts because the bell was on fire alarm.

We all sat down,then I started to worry about my mum, is she okay?
Some teachers announced they did a mistake, instead of coming outside, we just have to duck, roll and cover.

We slowly walked back inside and went on to an earthquake website.
A lot of people in Hawkes Bay felt that earthquake!

That was exciting.


Camp day 3

We tore open the clue and thrust our eyes into it.
We ran to the location printed on the clue.


I tip toed across the wire bridge and got to the other side, so did my team.


We ran to Mr Moriarty and got the reply....
“You are The first team to arrive”


We yelled in joy and span around rejoicing.
“WAHOO!”


We carried some buckets back for Mr Moriarty.

Once we got back we just waited for the other teams to finish.

Monday, 8 July 2013

Camp Reflection.


Reflection for Camp


My goal for camp was to man up and try things.


I achieved this because of made dad helping me.


Something I was pleased with was Having such a fun time
                            
because it made me happy.
I really enjoyed learning the animal game
                  
because the animal game is awesome.
Something I found hard was trying not to cry when getting hit my tonnes of dodgeballs.


Something that made me think was when i was getting called in the animal game
because its quite fast-paced.
· My top 5 favourite things about camp were:


Favourite Things
Reason Why
1.ANIMAL GAME!
it’s so fun!
2.Amazing race.
It was challenging
3.Dodgeball
It would look awesome in slow motion.
4.Confidence course
made me confident.
5.Camp
IT WAS AWESOME!



Sunday, 7 July 2013

The Lightning Trick (Part 1)

As the lightning struck I hid under my pillow.
What was happening?
I heard another boom of thunder.
I put my pillow over my ears and slowly went to sleep...

As I slowly opened my eyes I saw that I was still in my tent...
I unzipped my tent then saw the flashes of blue and red lightning zap down the huge mountain...
I quickly comando rolled back into my tent and zipped it up tight.
I looked out the window and saw this huge rainbow beam come out of the mountain.
Everything went black.

I woke up slowly, I saw that my tent was still intact, and I was still alive.
What had happened?
I unzipped my tent.
Of course.
NOTHING had happened.
Nothing.

Nope, I was wrong.
A stick was stuck in the ground right next to my tent, a stick.
What the heck happened?
Well I do like sticks, so I’ll keep this.
2 hours later (That's what it felt like) we were walking towards this old shack.
I decided to go into the forest and play
I decided to use the stick like a gun.
“PEW PEW PEW! take that trees!”
At that very instant I saw one of the tree's branches turn into a gun.

My heart almost skipped a beat.
“Uuuuuuh” I said, trembling with fear.
“Levitate?” I said as I lifted my stick up, and the gun lifted up too!
“I am loving this already.” I said.
“CHOCOLATE TREE!” I said as I turned stuff into chocolate

5 minutes later.
“Teva time to go!” I heard my mum shout
“JUST A MINUTE!” I shouted, then thought quick.
“Uhhh Undo?” I said as everything went back to normal.
“YEAH!” I said as I commando rolled away with the stick in my backpack.

We Stopped for a lunch break, I sneaked off into the forest with my lunch box and turned my food into chocolate.
“Good boy for eating that lettuce and tomato mayonnaise sandwich, Teva!” My mum said
“I was hungry?” I said

I walked along kicking some regular sticks around.
We were almost home, and something told me using that stick at home would be a bit more fun.

Wednesday, 3 July 2013

Going to the Mahia

“Come on Teva we’re going!”
It's Friday and I’m going on my dad’s holiday with him.
We’re going to Mahia on the edge of Hawkes Bay
I feel nervous about the trip.
My mum starts the car and as we pass the school I wave goodbye.


After about... 25 Minutes we stop at a gas station.
There’s my cousin! I wave to him and he waves back.
We follow our cousin’s car and then I hop in my cousin’s car
We chat and chat until we got bored.
My cousin started to feel sick a little.


We stopped at a restaurant and had some hot chips and mini-pies.
After that we kept going on our trip to Mahia, but on the way we got a text from my dad saying he’ll be late to Mahia.


Later we got to Mahia, and the house was AMAZING!
Bunk Beds, 2 Couches, 2 Stories, 2 Coffee Tables, 2 Showers, 2 bathrooms, 2 Every Thing!

Stay Tuned For Part Two!

Monday, 24 June 2013

Camp Day 3

Camp Day 3: Waterfall



We’re going to some waterfalls, They sound pretty huge!


WOAH! That waterfall is Huge MASSIVE!
Me and my dad stood together with the waterfall behind us. “Cheese!”

All of the water looks like hundreds of wrestlers wrestling under water.
The water tossed and turned like my dad when he hasn’t had enough sleep.

My friends and I stared into the rushing water, seeing where it leads.
I even wondered if there was a cave behind that waterfall, and I felt like it was a portal to another world.

The waterfall looked like Mr T firing his little friend.

Several people gasped when they got to the stone platform, I did too.
some people tried to look cool when getting there photo.

I felt like It was a huge jungle with extinct wild life in it.

We walked to the Cars and went back and had some tasty lunch.
Spaghetti and cheese toasties on the floor with paper instead of plates, Yum


Friday, 14 June 2013

Camp Day 1: Kiwi encounter

 I brush the gentle but tough kiwi’s feathers. I thought it would be softer, Though. 
By listening to the kiwi creche staff, I learnt some cool things!
Did you know that kiwis lay eggs the 3rd of the size of its body?

I really like all the facts I just learned.

We jump into our vehicle, now we are going  to camp!
The Truck rattled and tattled as we drove away.

The kiwi was quite cute, but it was a little angry, it was like waking him up in the middle of the night (for him)

WALT choose words that describe a moment (in an exciting way) for the reader
YOUR SIGNS OF SUCCESS
  • begins in the action
  • present tense (I am, not I was)
  • short, sharp sentences
  • strong verbs
  • uses the senses (look, feel, hear, taste, smell)
  • language features (simile, alliteration, onomatopoeia, metaphor)
  • show personality (sounds like you, humour, feelings, exaggeration)

Thursday, 30 May 2013

Tuesday, 28 May 2013

The lightning trick. (Part 1)

As the lightning struck I hid under my pillow.
What was happening?
I heard another boom of Thunder.
I put my pillow over my ears and slowly went to sleep...


As i slowly opened my eyes I saw that i was still in my tent...
I unzipped my tent then saw the flashes of blue and red lightning zap down the huge mountain...
I quickly comando rolled back into my tent and zipped it up tight.
I looked out the window and saw this huge rainbow beam come out of the mountain.
Everything went Black.


I woke up slowly, I saw That my tent was still intact, and i’m still alive.
What had happened?
I unzipped my tent.
Of course.
NOTHING had happened.
Nothing.


Nope, I was wrong.
A stick was stuck in the ground right next to My tent, A stick.
What the heck happened?
Well I do like sticks, so i’ll keep this.


2 hours later (Thats what it felt like) We were walking towards this old shack.
I decided to go into the forest and play
I decided to use the stick like a gun
“PEW PEW PEW! take that trees!”
At that very instant i saw one of the trees branches turn into a gun.


My heart almost skipped a beat.
“uuuuuuh” I said, trembling with fear.
“Levitate?” I said as i lifted my stick up, and the gun lifted up too!
“I am loving this already.” I said.
“CHOCOLATE TREE!” I said as i turned stuff into chocolate


5 minutes later.
“Teva time to go!” I heard my mum shout
“JUST A MINUTE!” I shouted, then thought quick.
“Uhhh Undo?” I said as everything went back to normal.
“YEAH!” I said as i commando rolled away with the stick in my backpack.


We Stopped for a lunch break, I sneaked off into the forest With my lunch box and turned my food into chocolate.
“Good boy for eating that lettuce and tomato mayonnaise sandwich, Teva!” My mum said
“I was hungry?” I said


I walked along kicking some regular sticks around.
We were almost home, and something told me using that stick at home would be a bit more fun.

Monday, 15 April 2013

Reflection For Walkathon


Reflection for walkathon
-Leopards
· Something I was pleased with was That I made it to the end, because it makes me feel proud, and also using teamwork, my team didn’t leave me behind, it felt good.
· I really enjoyed learning how long it would be to walk to camp, because it is a very long Distance!
· Something I found hard was Walking the whole way.
· Something that made me think was How long the way was, Because it seemed a very long way at the start!
· Something I want to get better at is walking long distances without getting exhausted like my dad.
         

Friday, 12 April 2013

My Computer Poem


My Computer
I was always lucky, to have a new lap-top.
Not much on it, but inside it’s like a big beauty.
I may of been Nine, But it was a cracker inside.
I loved it for years, until it was like a part of me.


Every Saturday Morning, I’d run and press a button, flashing lights would be working then, I really loved it, never let me down, Until it started getting older.


Maybe I was dreaming, No i wasn’t, it was as real as a wooden door.

It started shutting down on me, I really loved it, it felt like it was getting sick... I really wanted to cure it... So I tried and I felt some tears of joy, If you just want to play all day... don't use it to much, just download little, don’t put so many random stuff... Just use some stuff, while it lasts...

Song Pattern: Dun Dun Da Da Dun Dun Da Da Dun Dun Da Da, Bun Bun Bun (Repeat x1)
Dun Daa Daa Dun Daa Daa Dun Dar Dar Dar!
Duna-Dun.
(End)

Wednesday, 10 April 2013

Beans


Beans

Woosh, I zoom past the dodgeballs, while catching another then throwing it.
I see that the opposing team has put down a trap with a dodgeball for someone to get, who gets balls thrown at him/her!
I run into the trap, doing a cartwheel dodging all the balls, without a single scratch!
I saw gaping mouths staring at me while I keep throwing balls at the other team
I could smell dirt getting torn up by kids, and I could see it too
I could hear so much racket, my ears were stinging!
I cartwheel again, and again, I start getting dizzy, I stumble back and get hit by a hard solid ball.
“Awww, man” I say, walking to the back of the line.

Monday, 25 March 2013

Friday, 15 March 2013

Star Wars State Tuned Poem



Audio recording and upload >>

Last night I crunched Darth Vader’s ship in half
C3PO malfunctioned,
We ran to the 7th junction.
My lightsaber cut the door in half.
And Darth Vader entered with an evil laugh.

The droids ran in with laser guns.
And then I thought this is not fun, Oh no!


This Recording/Poem Was Made by Zeb, and Teva

An Ordinary Afternoon



This Is my Ordinary Writing, I hoped you liked it.
I liked making it very much, and especially liked imagining it.

Tuesday, 12 March 2013

5 things you should know about me




If you liked it, leave a comment!
I really enjoyed using drawings to make this cool, and write it!

I hoped you liked it!

Thursday, 28 February 2013

Summer Moment

I was striding down the dusty crowded roads, of parachute, 2013.

This, Is parachute.

I Walked back to our tent, anglicans@parachute, I smelt the gentle tasteful smell of fish patties.
My nose was full of dust, so I couldn’t make out the fish.
“What Are you cooking?” I asked.
“Fish burgers.” My dad told me.
“Okay” I said.
I saw some kids with there mum wheeling them round in a trolley
“Wheee, fast faster!” one of them yelled
I could imagine them on a sand buggy zooming around in the desert.
I hear some music coming from the other side of the road, some people playing on rubbish bins with bottles were making music. I could imagine them on the big mainstage, playing a song.
I see some people playing cards. I could imagine them as the professional card players.
I sit down, put my sunglasses on and look into the sunset.

Become famous with friends, Or not at all.


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