Camp day 3

We tore open the clue and thrust our eyes into it.

We ran to the location printed on the clue.

I tip toed across the wire bridge and got to the other side, so did my team.

We ran to Mr Moriarty and got the reply....

“You are The first team to arrive”

We yelled in joy and span around rejoicing.

“WAHOO!”

We carried some buckets back for Mr Moriarty.

Once we got back we just waited for the other teams to finish.

Camp Reflection.

Reflection for Camp

My goal for camp was to man up and try things.

I achieved this because of made dad helping me.

Something I was pleased with was Having such a fun time

                            

because it made me happy.

I really enjoyed learning the animal game

                  

because the animal game is awesome.

Something I found hard was trying not to cry when getting hit my tonnes of dodgeballs.

Something that made me think was when i was getting called in the animal game

because its quite fast-paced.

· My top 5 favourite things about camp were:

Favourite Things	Reason Why
1.ANIMAL GAME!	it’s so fun!
2.Amazing race.	It was challenging
3.Dodgeball	It would look awesome in slow motion.
4.Confidence course	made me confident.
5.Camp	IT WAS AWESOME!

Camp Day 3

Camp Day 3: Waterfall

We’re going to some waterfalls, They sound pretty huge!

WOAH! That waterfall is Huge MASSIVE!

Me and my dad stood together with the waterfall behind us. “Cheese!”

All of the water looks like hundreds of wrestlers wrestling under water.

The water tossed and turned like my dad when he hasn’t had enough sleep.

My friends and I stared into the rushing water, seeing where it leads.

I even wondered if there was a cave behind that waterfall, and I felt like it was a portal to another world.

The waterfall looked like Mr T firing his little friend.

Several people gasped when they got to the stone platform, I did too.

some people tried to look cool when getting there photo.

I felt like It was a huge jungle with extinct wild life in it.

We walked to the Cars and went back and had some tasty lunch.

Spaghetti and cheese toasties on the floor with paper instead of plates, Yum

Camp Day 1: Kiwi encounter

 I brush the gentle but tough kiwi’s feathers. I thought it would be softer, Though. 
By listening to the kiwi creche staff, I learnt some cool things!

Did you know that kiwis lay eggs the 3rd of the size of its body?

I really like all the facts I just learned.

We jump into our vehicle, now we are going  to camp!
The Truck rattled and tattled as we drove away.

The kiwi was quite cute, but it was a little angry, it was like waking him up in the middle of the night (for him)

WALT choose words that describe a moment (in an exciting way) for the reader

YOUR SIGNS OF SUCCESS

• begins in the action
• present tense (I am, not I was)
• short, sharp sentences
• strong verbs
• uses the senses (look, feel, hear, taste, smell)
• language features (simile, alliteration, onomatopoeia, metaphor)
• show personality (sounds like you, humour, feelings, exaggeration)