Tuesday, 28 May 2013

The lightning trick. (Part 1)

As the lightning struck I hid under my pillow.
What was happening?
I heard another boom of Thunder.
I put my pillow over my ears and slowly went to sleep...

As i slowly opened my eyes I saw that i was still in my tent...
I unzipped my tent then saw the flashes of blue and red lightning zap down the huge mountain...
I quickly comando rolled back into my tent and zipped it up tight.
I looked out the window and saw this huge rainbow beam come out of the mountain.
Everything went Black.

I woke up slowly, I saw That my tent was still intact, and i’m still alive.
What had happened?
I unzipped my tent.
Of course.
NOTHING had happened.

Nope, I was wrong.
A stick was stuck in the ground right next to My tent, A stick.
What the heck happened?
Well I do like sticks, so i’ll keep this.

2 hours later (Thats what it felt like) We were walking towards this old shack.
I decided to go into the forest and play
I decided to use the stick like a gun
“PEW PEW PEW! take that trees!”
At that very instant i saw one of the trees branches turn into a gun.

My heart almost skipped a beat.
“uuuuuuh” I said, trembling with fear.
“Levitate?” I said as i lifted my stick up, and the gun lifted up too!
“I am loving this already.” I said.
“CHOCOLATE TREE!” I said as i turned stuff into chocolate

5 minutes later.
“Teva time to go!” I heard my mum shout
“JUST A MINUTE!” I shouted, then thought quick.
“Uhhh Undo?” I said as everything went back to normal.
“YEAH!” I said as i commando rolled away with the stick in my backpack.

We Stopped for a lunch break, I sneaked off into the forest With my lunch box and turned my food into chocolate.
“Good boy for eating that lettuce and tomato mayonnaise sandwich, Teva!” My mum said
“I was hungry?” I said

I walked along kicking some regular sticks around.
We were almost home, and something told me using that stick at home would be a bit more fun.


  1. This is so AWESOME. The picture doesn't come up on my laptop, :-(. But I can't WAIT for part 2. There is going to be a part 2............ Right?

    1. That was just a to be continued sign, inderpreet.

  2. Wow Teva!
    You must of put allot of work into that!
    I chose this to go on my report, this is why.
    I think it is awesome because It’s really really interesting, It like sucks you in.



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