Tuesday 1 May 2012

The Start Of Term Two.


The Start Of Term Two
When I woke up on Monday morning, my face was buried in my pillow.“School holidays are over, school day today” I said. My mother came in, “Teva, Time for you to get out of bed, it's 7:30 already”. “7:30?!” I thought, “Ugh, I've got to get dressed mum!” I rummaged through my drawers trying to find my school clothes, I found them, I got dressed and had breakfast. While getting my bag I looked at the window, and stopped. I stared and stared at the beautiful fog and frost on the ground, my mother said “Hurry up, Teva! you're late for school!” I resumed what I was doing I went outside, then rode to school on my bike, while biking to school everything seemed... soundless while the fog was around... Then the fog lifted, I started seeing people walking around me, the cows in the school paddock mooing, and then I got to school.

8 comments:

  1. I love this piece of writing Teva

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  2. I love this piece of writing too, Teva.

    It really flows well and then you nail the ending (when the fog lifts and everything slows down). Great language choices too (rummaged, resumed, mooing)!

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  3. awesome story Teva I like how it says I was buried in my pillow haha!

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  4. rammed is an awesome word in stead of push.

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  5. Amazing Teva
    as short as it is its an Awesome piece of writing

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    1. Its awesome, and short, just like me!

      (P.S: Thank's for the feed back!)

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  6. Great piece of writing Teva
    I love that you have this sentence I rummaged through my drawers trying to find my school clothes.
    What is the word you did for rummaged?
    Did you use the other word book?
    Katrina

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    1. Thank you, katrina, and I also just came up with the word Rummaged.

      (P.S My mum never really Wakes me up)

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