Monday, 24 June 2013

Camp Day 3

Camp Day 3: Waterfall



We’re going to some waterfalls, They sound pretty huge!


WOAH! That waterfall is Huge MASSIVE!
Me and my dad stood together with the waterfall behind us. “Cheese!”

All of the water looks like hundreds of wrestlers wrestling under water.
The water tossed and turned like my dad when he hasn’t had enough sleep.

My friends and I stared into the rushing water, seeing where it leads.
I even wondered if there was a cave behind that waterfall, and I felt like it was a portal to another world.

The waterfall looked like Mr T firing his little friend.

Several people gasped when they got to the stone platform, I did too.
some people tried to look cool when getting there photo.

I felt like It was a huge jungle with extinct wild life in it.

We walked to the Cars and went back and had some tasty lunch.
Spaghetti and cheese toasties on the floor with paper instead of plates, Yum


7 comments:

  1. Entertaining post, Teva.

    There is a lot of personality in this writing and you highlight the main parts well with good vocabulary choices.

    Excellent use of multimedia too.

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  2. Wow clever imagery in your writing. Comparing the water fall to wrestlers and your Dad having a restless sleep - works really well. Lively and fun style - very easy to read. I like the bit strip. I've never seen one before. I might have to look online. Is it a free download?

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    1. Your actually don't need to download bitstrips!
      All you need is flash, or is it java, i forgot.
      Here is a link to it: http://www.bitstrips.com/

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  3. Amazing post Teva,
    You really used your imagination.
    Well done.
    What was your scariest part?
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  4. I bet you enjoyed it a lot Teva.
    We wish we could go to that waterfall and have some of your tasty lunch!
    How many days did you stay there?
    From Rafeea & Joshua

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  5. Wow Teva you have done a wonderful job on your bitstrip keep it up!

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