Sunday 10 June 2012

Licked (my end).

Wow dad was holding up.
time for my secret weapon...
“3... 2... 2...” I whispered to myself, then pulled out dad’s fly swap and swatted my plate.

“AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANNNNDRRREEEEEEWWWWW!” says Dad.
“Y-y-y-yes?” I stammered.
“USE YOUR MANNERS, ANDREW!” says Dad.
“YOUR SON IS SO ROTTEN!” says Mr Spinks.
“YOU SHALL NOT GET A PROMOTION, SINCE YOUR SON IS SO ROTTEN!” says Mr Spinks.
“B-b-b-b-but” says dad.
“BUT NOTHING!” says Mr Spinks.
“ANNNNNNDRREEEEWWWWW!” says dad.
“You broke your promise na na na na na!” I say.
“3 2 1” I think to myself.
“YOU’RE GROUNDED FOR...” Dad said as I waited for the dreadful word.
“Zero days!” I say, quickly interrupting him.
“NO, 10 WEEKS!” Dad says.
“WHAT, NO, NO, NO, NO,” says Mum.
“One day,” says mum.
“BUT!” says dad.
“No buts,” Mum says like Spinks said.
“Because, he made you break his promise,” says Mum.
“AWWWW MAN,” says Dad.




The End

5 comments:

  1. Cool Teva!
    I like the ending its funny.
    Whats your favourite part?

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    1. My favourite part was "ANNNNNNDRREEEEWWWWW."

      Thanks, it was funny

      Sincerely, Teva Tait

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  2. Amazing Teva!
    I love your ending it is so funny.
    I love the part where it says “Y-y-y-yes?” I stammered that really cool. what your favourite sentence?

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  3. Great job Teva. I loved how you made them do long yells. How did you make such a funny ending?

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  4. Awesome Teva

    Your ending is so cool, I love how you kept counting down.
    I like how you interrupted him and said zero days haha.

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