Camp Day 3: Waterfall
We’re going to some waterfalls, They sound pretty huge!
WOAH! That waterfall is Huge MASSIVE!
Me and my dad stood together with the waterfall behind us. “Cheese!”
The water tossed and turned like my dad when he hasn’t had enough sleep.
My friends and I stared into the rushing water, seeing where it leads.
I even wondered if there was a cave behind that waterfall, and I felt like it was a portal to another world.
The waterfall looked like Mr T firing his little friend.
Several people gasped when they got to the stone platform, I did too.
some people tried to look cool when getting there photo.
I felt like It was a huge jungle with extinct wild life in it.
We walked to the Cars and went back and had some tasty lunch.
Spaghetti and cheese toasties on the floor with paper instead of plates, Yum
Entertaining post, Teva.
ReplyDeleteThere is a lot of personality in this writing and you highlight the main parts well with good vocabulary choices.
Excellent use of multimedia too.
Wow clever imagery in your writing. Comparing the water fall to wrestlers and your Dad having a restless sleep - works really well. Lively and fun style - very easy to read. I like the bit strip. I've never seen one before. I might have to look online. Is it a free download?
ReplyDeleteYour actually don't need to download bitstrips!
DeleteAll you need is flash, or is it java, i forgot.
Here is a link to it: http://www.bitstrips.com/
Cool teva.I like it!
ReplyDeleteAmazing post Teva,
ReplyDeleteYou really used your imagination.
Well done.
What was your scariest part?
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I bet you enjoyed it a lot Teva.
ReplyDeleteWe wish we could go to that waterfall and have some of your tasty lunch!
How many days did you stay there?
From Rafeea & Joshua
Wow Teva you have done a wonderful job on your bitstrip keep it up!
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