Tuesday, 30 July 2013

"Its A Dead Mouse"

“Its a dead mouse,” said the cat.
“No, Its a dog biscuit,” said the dog.

The dog nudges it over, “see, A mouse has a tail!” said the dog.
“But the tail is covered by the grass!” said the cat.

The cat picks it up “this mouse has no eyes!” Said the cat.
“I told you it was a dog biscuit,” said the dog.

“but it has a tail!” Said the cat.
“What?” Said the dog.

“Here Look” Says the cat
The cat lifts it up for the dog to see.
“What is it?”
Teva comes out of the house.

“Oh, there’s my computer mouse!


  1. Great story Teva.
    Awesome the ending.
    I love the sense of humor.

    1. Thanks elijah!
      Sincerely, Teva Tait.

  2. Cool Teva I love your writing its so cool and your cartoon. Keep up the good work.

  3. HA HA HA Teva, very funny.
    I like how you did it on Bitstrips and instead of a dog biscuit or a dead mouse, it was a computer mouse!
    Keep up the laughs and the good work. :-)

  4. Wow Teva!
    I really like the way you have used bit-strips.
    I really sounds and looks real.
    I like how you have used a different tool to present it too.
    Well done:)

  5. Cool job teva.I like it!

  6. Awesome Teva,
    Well done.
    I like your writing keep it up.

  7. What a great idea to end your story with.
    I like the little bitstrip at the end.
    I think that it is really funny how the dog and the cat are both wrong.
    Well done:-)

  8. Awesome Comic teva!
    I hope one time you could teach me how to use this!
    I had a look at your other ones to they are very funny!

    From Cam :3

  9. Great work Teva, very funny! You made a great idea with the computer mouse. Awesome work Teva, keep it up ;-).

  10. Wow how exciting I was confused what it was.
    Great work.

  11. That end part is so funny. The cat was right but it was a computer mouse. Well done:)

  12. That was really funny I couldn't believe it was a computer mouse.
    great job



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